Comment 30538

By Teacher (anonymous) | Posted April 27, 2009 at 15:22:07

^ Your passion comes through but would benefit from some basic research, as many claims are unsubstantiated. As well, restraint is called for in drawing over-strong conclusions from limited information. The essay also suffers from numerous spelling and grammatical errors. C-

(Please revise and resubmit by next Monday for another chance at grading.)

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